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Song for Your Soul by ~Bethuel09:iconBethuel09:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


I will sing you a song my love.
a sweet song,
a happy song,
a song to soothe your turbulent soul,
a song to carry you into your dreams,
Where you can satiate your heart with bliss.
Then in the morning when you wake,
your kisses will be sweet and not bitter.
Your soul will be in ecstasy,
and the remorse that was there will be gone.
No more tears at night,
no more cries of agony,
I will sing you a song to spirit your heart into dreams.
Now go to sleep my love,
lay your head on my breasts.
Let me sing you a song of bliss,
let me sing you a song of love.
©2005-2009 ~Bethuel09
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~Gayahuaniel Jul 29, 2005, 6:53:17 AM
Aw how sweet Beth. Written for anyone special?

I really like it, well written.

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Uuma quena en'mani lle ume (ri'mani lle umaya). (Uma ta ar'lava ta quena ten'irste'.)


Don't talk about what you have done (or what you are going to do). (Do it and let it speak for itself.)
:iconbleedingromantic:
~BleedingRomantic Jul 29, 2005, 8:10:35 AM
Lovely verse.

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She has this daredevil's smile and a porcelain doll face to match her satin pillow smile and her angel born grace. She is my everything from her perfection to her flaws, as she dominates my thoughts with her killer heart claws.. ~Me
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~myheartsplitopen Jul 29, 2005, 9:59:13 AM
:D :heart: beautifull!

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<thump-thump3 --- Keila

...listen well, will you marry me?
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~April-Chan Jul 29, 2005, 3:53:18 PM
I really like it. The only thing I have to say it that the lines:

a sweet song,
a happy song,

I thin they would look better together rather then aprart...

But I love this poem! A def. fav!
:iconbethuel09:
~Bethuel09 Jul 29, 2005, 4:17:35 PM
no not really -_- it was just in my brain ><

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~Certainty of death, small chance of sucess, what are we waiting for?~ Gimli son of Gloin

~hmm I suppose that concludes negotiations~ Gimli son of Gloin
:iconbethuel09:
~Bethuel09 Jul 29, 2005, 4:23:22 PM
hmm thank u...

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~Certainty of death, small chance of sucess, what are we waiting for?~ Gimli son of Gloin

~hmm I suppose that concludes negotiations~ Gimli son of Gloin
:iconbethuel09:
~Bethuel09 Jul 29, 2005, 4:47:28 PM
thank i was hoping for that u sure no other critique?

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~Certainty of death, small chance of sucess, what are we waiting for?~ Gimli son of Gloin

~hmm I suppose that concludes negotiations~ Gimli son of Gloin
:iconbethuel09:
~Bethuel09 Jul 29, 2005, 4:48:58 PM
hm good idear i was thinking ther was something wrong with it so will do dear ^^ :salute:

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~Certainty of death, small chance of sucess, what are we waiting for?~ Gimli son of Gloin

~hmm I suppose that concludes negotiations~ Gimli son of Gloin
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~SakyraRebellion Jul 30, 2005, 8:58:41 AM
:giggle: nice sis =D

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I miss you forever
i love you.
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